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Vikas_Thakur_8226
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Protagonist is one of the most dumbest i have seen. He doesn't know even what is happening around him around him._____________________________________________

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Transmigration: Children of The Plane

slarbi123

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Deve_Julien
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My biggest problem is how his parent forgot their suspicion he was possessed, it would have been easy to confirm it by asking something only their real son know. I'm only at chapter 20 but it's something that make me wonder if it's worth to read more.

slarbi123:Sorry, you felt like that. Can you explain a little more so I can either fix It or stop that from continuing? This is my first work, and I want to perfect it before continuing onto other projects.
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Sorry, you felt like that. Can you explain a little more so I can either fix It or stop that from continuing? This is my first work, and I want to perfect it before continuing onto other projects.