Review Detail of slarbi123 in Transmigration: Children of The Plane
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Shameless Author review my last novel was a dude because while I could imagine and plan out later arcs the beginning was too hard to right. This one will be different so try and stick for the ride.
Transmigration: Children of The Plane
slarbi123
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In this edited version, the only part I had cut out was that really weird auction side arc with Xiao'er and the MC, and honestly, I didn't really like it. Xiao'er as a whole was just a Mary Sue love interest that was never going to get much attention, so I decided to remove her as a love interest. If that's what you're talking about, then that's my answer, but if it's not, reply to this again with the part you are and I'll get back to you.
Unit29:Question: why did you change aspects of the story, that you've published elsewhere almost a year+ ago? The other version feels more complete and has more depth to it. This version has had parts and chapters cut out...image
While it’s still in theory there will most likely be a girl with a dragon bloodline but vampire no doesn’t really fit in a Chinese cultivation novel. I’ve never seen one at least besides like blood art users from demonic cultivators
Tommyshelby:Sorry question
slarbi123:While it’s still in theory there will most likely be a girl with a dragon bloodline but vampire no doesn’t really fit in a Chinese cultivation novel. I’ve never seen one at least besides like blood art users from demonic cultivators
Um time will tell my friend my novel is still in the early stages but that’s good idea I’ll 100% keep it in mind
Tommyshelby:Like the primordial ice Phoenix and fire Phoenix
slarbi123:Um time will tell my friend my novel is still in the early stages but that’s good idea I’ll 100% keep it in mind
This part is around 1300 chapters if I do it right, but it could be faster or slower depending on how long the chapters become. As for the second part, I have no clue as I only have theory-crafted it and haven't done anything besides that.
Kaique_Teodoro_9085:how many chapters do you plan to do to complete the story?
Chaotic Neutral, mostly, I think, with some Chaotic Good. Does what has to be done no matter the repercussions. Kills who need to be killed, stuff like that. Doesn't care for rules set by society but has some morality from his time on Earth. I don't really understand the moral alignment chart much, though. You should read and make the decisions yourself.
Uncertainty:What is the mc’s moral alignment
I have three planned so far, and I am sticking with that for a while. However, I can't 100% say it will stay like that for the entire novel. It's relatively early, after all.
Uncertainty:Harem size?