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Review Detail of TheCartoonist in A Hollow in DC and Beyond.

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this fanfic isn't that good, the author clearly doesn't know what a vastolorde is, the mc has a clear lack of a mask and no hole, what's left of his mask is a crown like structure and only arrancars have a small portion of a mask and are pretty much human but here the author says the mc is a vastolorde when he looks human with only a bit of mask and no hole which are all things that define an arrancar(except the hole, arrancars still have holes), the writing quality is subpar. If the author fixed the hollow issue and the writing quality this would be a little better, this is a ok read if you have nothing else to read.

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A Hollow in DC and Beyond.

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