Review Detail of thunder_cat_2369 in A Hollow in DC and Beyond.

I think it's a pretty good read there are some things that can be worked on but I don't think the story is boring or bland, at the beginning of the story I thought it was going to be boring but after reading further on it gets alot better. The big problems for me is the Grammer and I think the main character should struggle with his hollow instinct to eat souls or be destructive.