Putting aside a few spelling errors, I'm really liking the story. Unlike some other mostly first-person perspective fanfcitions on this platforms, it actually.... Feels. There is personality. You can feel what the main character is feeling in a way. Not to mention the fact that the author completly nailed the explosive personality along with the personality of other characters. For the most part, the imagery is on point and the diction fits. It's also in somewhat of a slow-pace which is nice. Keep up the good work!
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LIKEEmmanuel_Capricorn:Somewhat detailed Review feels so good..It feels more genuine if you describe it...image
I got to like chapter 3 before I dropped cause he has memories of another life but acts like a 4 year old
214dnde:So he is