Review Detail of xash_alan in (Delete) From The Future

The synopsis had me interested at first, but the first few chapters dwelled too much on irrelevant details. None of them even serve any purpose from what I can see. It would have been better if Geumbi transmigrated by the end of the first chapter at least. It's also a little hard to continue reading because of the language. I would suggest the author spend more time reading and writing to get a better understanding of the language. All in all, consistency is still the key. So, as long as you try hard and do not give up, all the while continuing to learn and grow, things are bound to become better. Best of luck for your writing, author-nim ^^