Review Detail of Frorstyflame in The Crown's Heir

Item: The Crown's Heir
Rating: 3.8

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FrorstyflameLv21yrFrorstyflame

I cannot say much with just one chapter, but the summary made me interested, searching for dragons, the writing quality is okay but the author needs to put efforts in it and [img=update][img=update][img=update]

The Crown's Heir

Hank_moses

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Hank_mosesAuthorHank_moses

The writing style is meant to give it a middle age feel that's the whole idea but I'll try adjusting it

1yr

FrorstyflameLv2Frorstyflame

you could try to use old English words if you could as the language of dragons and the rest is fine just make conversation feel more natural

Hank_moses:The writing style is meant to give it a middle age feel that's the whole idea but I'll try adjusting it

1yr

Hank_mosesAuthorHank_moses

Alright. Thanks for the suggestion, I'll have it updated

1yr