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It was incredible. You write well, buddy. The way you described Tia was both amusing and endearing. The bond you've formed between Marie and Tia is also enthralling. I suggest you try making the paragraphs short so that it looks good and readers can enjoy them.

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Thanks mate, I'll keep that in mind