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Review Detail of LoudGryphon in Immortal In The Magic World

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I must say the first 150 chapters were good, the characters were great and having them like actually die was surprising as usually protagonists save them with something, him accepting his immortality was refreshing, the translation was pretty decent, and the time-skips helped illustrate his immortality. But after that…yikes, the story gets…repetitive, i mean different locations and all, yeah he moves around from time to time. But the characters took a nosedive, like the enemies are like xianxia antagonists, acting cocky as all hell, after they fail to attack the mc, they always do this stupid, repetitive joke like ‘oh, i’m sorry, it was an accident’, like what?!? It does a complete 180 on their personality and it happens again and again like…god damn where did their spine go? Also is it only me to find it strange that the old murloc does the same-thing as the previous antagonists!? Do they all speak the same language because of the past mages? Translation after the aforementioned first 150 chapters was bad, typical Chinese translation, ruins the immersion…badly and names changing from blood alliance then to alliance of the blood, changing from one another, did the translator change? Really, i hope they get their stuff together, i am so sad seeing the story worsen as time goes on…like the start was good but it feels like the author lost passion after the Empire arc

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