Review Detail of FTLnovaKid in Immortal In The Magic World

This book has a great plot and it could turn into a great story. For a fast paced novel it is very fast paced, You really shouldn’t get all that attached to characters. Also the MC is immortal, but also has a lot going against him. Like a world that is not suitable for mages, and he does not have overwhelming mage talent. The big negative about this book is…… The translation is HORRENDOUS, and I mean horrendous. It is very hard to read sometimes as you literally have to rewrite a whole chapter in your mind. And it’s not like in later chapters it gets better, somtimes it’s even worse. 🤦 The book just has so much potential to be good but the translation really drags it down.