Review Detail of ninjakartoffel in Immortal In The Magic World

It was a interesting read but im quiting at chapter 106. I find it hard to read as he never manage to grow up mentaly at all. He speaks like a fool to royalty and nobility in a medival setting as if he dont understand that royalty and nobility dont talk like the common people. His «forget it» to talk about something else. Regardless of how old he gets or if he is takling to royalty. his vocabulary Seems like a child. As he gets older and «wise» its still the same boy inside. He never mange to give the feeling of a old wise man (grandpa) when he speaks. in the story it talks about his pain of losing his best friends but as the reader you hardly even know any of them at all. I feel that in many ways it feels like your speeding trough the story as you read. Some events that feels like big life changing events is over in 2 lines to get to the next big Thing that may also end in 2 lines and your stuck there wondering what happend. The random mix of him and her… at times i hade to Wonder if Eli was a girl and i just missed it. same with kingdom and empire sometimes a country is a kingdom sometimes the same country is a empire…