Review Detail of Heavens_Path in Immortal In The Magic World

I am really enjoying this new book! The MC doesn't have some ridiculous nonsense cheat, that instantly gives him everything he needs or provides plot armour. Rather he has only one advantage (immortality) and has to work hard and take things patiently in order to rise to the top. Story building is good, and the pace is perfect. Not much is currently known about the world, but in a good/mysterious way. However my only issue with this novel is the grammar quality, the names are often spelt differently in the same chapter. It's annoying, and there are some other small grammatical mistakes. A simple proofread would fix this issue! Overall, excellent book and I hope it gets picked!