Review Detail of Majer3 in Heavens' Grimoire: Avatar of Chaos

This following review has been published by Wise Entities Sect Academy (a writer community). https://wise-entities-padoga.webnode.page/sect-academia/ Fate. (Fuck I hate that world really it always drops the agency and real choice, and things are thought in deterministic ideologies/religions/bs philosophies. Fate is the step uncle of laziness. Oh yea the story -Okay I get the point in synopsis but now synopsis doesn't really tell anything but cliche determination plot thing, albeit in kind of critical manner but still. The point of the synopsis is either info dump enough to advertise the whole world building, or invest reader to specific main character/s or offer some unique or very specific scenario that might interest people as a advertisement. It really has to motivate people to open your novel. Because of this reason I recommend re-writing it based on your world and actual setting. -Antihero genius, I hope this is done by not making everyone else stupid. -When you steal 95 imperial coins?? So what’s the value of it, could MC say that this won’t even buy me 1 week of food or something comparable. This is always very important when any number of coins or currencies are first introduced. -Damn the story flow is pretty decent, only thing I would want more is decent info dumping at some point but its good going. -Dialogue is practical, could write more feelings meta on it to flourish the characters acts. -Status window all details again, Ok good no status window spamming, this is probl most balanced use of it what I have seen for a long time. -If you use missions/quest keep them open enough not to create tunnel vision for all the activities of MC. More of advice at this point.