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Review Detail of BerkeOzbek in Born As The Twin Of Shin Wolford With Elf Blood

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BerkeOzbek
BerkeOzbekLv21yrBerkeOzbek

disappointment Mc has zero effects on the story Shin still acts the same despite having someone to talk his age and still the same boring character he was And look at that our mc who was complete copy of shin just became a crazed murderer in one night how freakin perfect Same boy who was stunned still when seeing girl his age felt nothing while he killed dozens of people in a night really author despite all those comments saying his behavior was unrealistic you still wrote this "thing" (ı dont even know what to say)

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Born As The Twin Of Shin Wolford With Elf Blood

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L_6
L_6AuthorL_6

Hey, if you don’t like it then that’s okay thanks for reading even if you didn’t enjoy it. I’m just doing it for fun so although I think criticism is good, I’m not going to change my writing style or entire book based on what other people want. Hopefully some people enjoy my writing, but I know I enjoy writing it which I think is more important, so thanks for the criticism, I hope you have a good day.

tt_g
tt_gLv4tt_g

He’s not even asking you to change your writing style though… he’s asking you to write better

L_6:Hey, if you don’t like it then that’s okay thanks for reading even if you didn’t enjoy it. I’m just doing it for fun so although I think criticism is good, I’m not going to change my writing style or entire book based on what other people want. Hopefully some people enjoy my writing, but I know I enjoy writing it which I think is more important, so thanks for the criticism, I hope you have a good day.
L_6
L_6AuthorL_6

Easier said than done dude, I’m not a professional writer and I do it for fun in my spare time when I’m not in a lesson or doing homework so it isn’t exactly my bingest goal right now to focus solely on writing

tt_g:He’s not even asking you to change your writing style though… he’s asking you to write better
Green_lazy1
Green_lazy1Lv3Green_lazy1

Don't worry, this book is fine as it is, just develop a little the plot and actions of the mc

hollowness
hollownessLv4hollowness

true, people think it's easy to change everything. anyway are you dropping this fic or you're just taking a break?

L_6:Easier said than done dude, I’m not a professional writer and I do it for fun in my spare time when I’m not in a lesson or doing homework so it isn’t exactly my bingest goal right now to focus solely on writing
Might_Cho
Might_ChoLv13Might_Cho

thx for the warning