Review Detail of ImPerfectlyPerfact in One piece: Sir Oliver Granger

Hey guys i am back again with my updated story. I worked hard for few day to correct my errors. I say don't expect much from me as I am just a student, don't have much time so there will slow updating stability. Don't expect for high quality things as I am not any official writer I am learning to put my story in simple sentence. Just like you I am also a fan of One piece so just enjoy it. Comment if I have any mistake so I'll try to correct it. Please taste the product by using your brain