Review Detail of Feliximaout in Amalgam Darth Vader/Snape (Wednesday/The Addams Family, HP, Star Wars)

I am currently reading chapter 35 and i felt the urge to write a revew, so here i am. I love the way you merged snapes and anikins personality. one can clearly perceive both of their traits in the mc. Your grammar is, as far as I as a non native speaker can judge, flawless. A typo every few chapters, but who cares. The Idea in it self is realy interresting and I cant whait to see how he integrates jedi techniques into modern magic. The only things that annoy me are his, in my oppinion, way to fast change in the looks department (Snape in the books was ugly, and after a few weeks of training he is described as some sort of prince?) and him growing a buisness empire in a few weeks. For everyone who understands even a little bit about buisness stuff that is just cringe. Even if you have a prototype, binging new produkts on the market can take jears. A portable computer in the 70s ? Way to unrealistic, considering most of the hardware making something like that possible wasn't even invented jet. A simple cRT screen without any computing power could weight 30 kg and more back then, and that is without batterys.