I have no problem w/ the writing, I just find this really boring. This just proves that you could do things right but would be deemed worthless if the story is boring itself.
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LIKEThat’s honestly what I think too, 6 chapters in and it has hell of a lot of dialogue. And the chapters are long, and don’t get me wrong, long chapters are a good thing, but if you’re going to have long chapters then don’t be adding a bunch of boring dialouge and scenes to the chapters, and the story seems slow. The prologue shouldn’t have last for more than one chapter and that’s definitely not a good thing.
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