Review Detail of shv_luffy98 in I Can Bring In-game Items Out

soo hard to read.. it's all over the place.. concepts aren't really clear.. MC suddenly gets a sniper rifle and it's not clear how he got it.. some people are saying in comments that he went abroad n used his personal space to get it.. but there's no mention of it at all.. One guy is killed in the game n when he's out he's driving his car all of a sudden.. and he immediately re-enters the game still driving.. how did he end up driving the car when he was in the game? or does the car detect he's in a game n drives itself? nothing mentioned.. there's no time stop or something n user has to wear a vr helmet to play n all.. there's other stuff like mc walks into a gym to test this strength.. coach seeing his form is wrong corrects it.. seeing MC is strong he immediately asks if he wants to become a coach.. even though all he got is strength.. MC rejects it.. n that's it.. nothing else.. only reason I can imagine why the author wrote those 3-4 paras is to make fun of other novels where MC does join a gym which is kinda stupid.. Real world is even more ambiguous.. MC enters the game at night n is out by morning.. what does he do during the daytime? go to work? go to college? nothing.. he eats meat from the game.. exercises.. re enters the game.. all I can get from this is that MC takes an entire day to eat n go for a run.. MC goes to his village all of a sudden to defeat his friend/neighbour as he became stronger.. then that friend guards his house when MC is playing the game.. nothing else.. Basically everything is all over the place.. written very poorly.. n half done.. upon that translation is really bad making it even harder to read.. overall it's simply unpleasant to read.. a complete waste of time