Review Detail of some_writer in World Travel System: High School Dxd ,Naruto etc.

When I said not to drop your fanfic. I did not mean fudging up the story. I just read the new chapter and i was disappointed. This book has no sense of style at all. It's the usual world domination and girl stealing on these types of books. I thought this would satisfy me to some degree but it made a fellow author disappointed and confused. Sure i know you're writing for fun, but at least put effort into this so that fans actually like what you're writing. That's what some of the fans of this book want, an actual good book with some degree of logic in it.