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Review Detail of Boss_Ace in World Travel System: High School Dxd ,Naruto etc.

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Boss_Ace
Boss_AceAuthor1yrBoss_Ace

I am a new author so If you guys came here expecting some professional level work then I will suggest you to drop this novel. I am writing this for novel for fun. It will be good if you guys can try to enjoy my story rather than forcefully finding mistakes in everything. 1. MC will be overpowered and sometimes even arrogant. 2. I will also change the Canon. 3. The Harem will be large so of course I can't develop the relationship between the characters properly in few chapters. 4. MC will travel to worlds like MHA, Dxd, Naruto, Arifureta, Tensura. 5. I am not a native English speaker, so there might be some grammatical errors. Though I will try to fix all errors and plot holes. If you guys don't like any of the above point then please you can drop the Novel instead of spreading hate. Thanks for reading ❤❤

World Travel System: High School Dxd ,Naruto etc.

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CLIFF_CHAN
CLIFF_CHANLv13CLIFF_CHAN

as the mc didn't know all this is an illusion made by the angel fuled by his desires

214dnde
214dndeLv4214dnde

Pls domt have him be friends with issei, deku, and naruto

Boss_Ace
Boss_AceAuthorBoss_Ace

yeah that will never happen so don't worry

214dnde:Pls domt have him be friends with issei, deku, and naruto
Crownless312
Crownless312Lv4Crownless312

Oi don’ t drop it keep writing its a good one and why u care about other people’s opinions just writee

VenerableHolyDevil
VenerableHolyDevilLv13VenerableHolyDevil

bro it rushed towards its end all of a sudden, no school festival, no 1 A vs 1 B and you jumped many other arcs I think the reason might be that you made him too overpowered . Hope that the next world may be at s steady pace otherwise loved it

Cliffhanger_Mdfaka
Cliffhanger_MdfakaLv4Cliffhanger_Mdfaka

I'll give power stone every day just don't drop it

ShAdOw96
ShAdOw96Lv13ShAdOw96

are you gonna continue the story

cody_Scott
cody_ScottLv3cody_Scott

yes, please continue with this, please.