Review Detail of Little_Dragon_God in Star Dragon

I don't know what you people think of this story that I am creating but I am doing what I wanted to see that's all. I am not a professional writer in any way and am writing for the first time when saw that option of creating the stories. So far I think I am doing good since none of you good people complained. Even if there's ten of you guys reading it I don't care. I am going to write until I am satisfied and then may be start working on my original work that I am shy to show. Wish me luck.