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Review Detail of Lu_Shui in Justice And Desire

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The book is decently written with impeccable grammar. Author manages to describe the tough environment of law enforcement officers when dealing with gangsters and their underlings. I would prefer to have less cursing around and more complicated characters. The meeting of MC and FL could be more memorable, and the chapters could be written in such a way that they leave readers waiting for more. Other than that, good job! I am adding this to my collection! ❤️

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Justice And Desire

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Thank you so much. I appreciate your corrections and praise. I will look into all you pointed out and try to make the story way better. ❤