Review Detail of GetTheMilk in Stealing The Protagonist Lovers

Well so let me give my reviews. I am immature and completely new to novel world so please forgive my writing. But i will try to please you all with my novel. About this novel. Currently out mc is in a novel world similar to doulou world ( cause i have no time to think about my world so i took doulou world. I thought or taking Martial Peak world But that is very long so I didn't took ) From the details provided by the system our MC decided to change the date of the girls that will face while facing the various MC of the world. There will be also world hopping in the later chapters..... Wish me luck and please do write me if you find any wrong in the writing. I will try to correct in the future....