Review Detail of HeyHiHell0 in Ghost in MHA

On Ch.5, decided to drop due to my weak heart. Writing Quality: 5 Stars Stability of Updates: 4 Stars Story Development: 5 Stars Character Design: 4 Stars World Background: 4 Stars First thing I'd like to say is that the author did a great job conveying the three tags on this novel. The beginning of the story is new to me, as a person who doesn't read that much tragedy/dark plots. The author was pulling a reversal on a kind man who saves the MC laying on the road. The unfortunate MC was met with a man that saved him off the road and used him for his own selfish gains. The author portrays this OC quite well. I, as the reader quickly started hating him. Which the author wanted us to feel, as he described the inhumane things he put the kid through. Though, I really like his small thought process on when he was caught and interrogated and left alone. However, this character seemed melodramatic at times which quite annoyed me since I hated him so much. The MC relying on him and believing his words made me want to smack the man through the screen. The only thing I wished the author had done sooner was give us the MC's perspective. I wanted to know so badly how the MC felt at times, and how he felt towards the man. Because in author's case he could write later, that the MC truly did hate the man and pretended to like him, maybe there was also fear of capture of the police since he didn't want to be used by the government because of his powerful quirk. I, as the reader go through these questions in my head as I read this. However, if the author wrote how the MC is reliant and how much he loved the man through the MC's thoughts. Then I feel like the moments the MC and the man went through up till he gets captured and interrogated will become more impactful. Though, the author did write how the MC protected the man and conveyed his reliance toward him. I feel like it isn't trustworthy? or I can't find the word at the moment, but the questions would still arise, "Is the MC pretending? Does the MC truly feel that way? Does he think just like a normal kid?" World Background hasn't been touched upon that much since it's a fan fic and I'm guessing it's going to follow plot or maybe not, but it's definitely an AU since there's a place/street? called Thriller Bark which, I, to be honest, wasn't my cup of tea, and I wished the author would've thought of an original name. Story Development was a bit rushed, as I don't know if the author gave us a time on how long the MC was with the man. Since my weak heart found it hard to read some lines. It could've been a couple months or years? Only because the man found him as a kid and not a baby. Mentioning how much time has passed, would've been nice, as if it truly was a long time, I could accept a small time skip. Writing Quality, it's good, some typos, but I believe I mostly spotted capitalization errors. You won't be pissed about it being unreadable...