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Review Detail of Mastersun in The Weirwood Wolf ( Game of Thrones )

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Mastersun
MastersunLv11yrMastersun

The story is not very good, well, I won't say that it's bad, the main character of this story is a gray mouse, if you remove him from this story, there won't be any changes, it seems that the author is a fan of Rob Stark, and that in this story the main character here is Rob Stark, and not the main character of this story, and One and the like are superfluous here, and in my opinion they should not have been introduced into this story.

The Weirwood Wolf ( Game of Thrones )

Telling_Tall_Tales

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Telling_Tall_Tales
Telling_Tall_TalesAuthorTelling_Tall_Tales

Your probably right he shouldnt have, the story wasn’t very well thought out it’s my first go at writing. But it’s to late I could rewrite it but i couldn’t be bothered. Sorry glad you read even if it wasn’t up to your standards

Telling_Tall_Tales
Telling_Tall_TalesAuthorTelling_Tall_Tales

I appreciate the fair review by the way a lot of people just give no stars because the author did one thing wrong but you gave me what you believed my story deserved and I appreciate it.

Dave_kingmaker
Dave_kingmakerLv4Dave_kingmaker

Lie

Telling_Tall_Tales:Your probably right he shouldnt have, the story wasn’t very well thought out it’s my first go at writing. But it’s to late I could rewrite it but i couldn’t be bothered. Sorry glad you read even if it wasn’t up to your standards
Telling_Tall_Tales
Telling_Tall_TalesAuthorTelling_Tall_Tales

What’s a lie

Dave_kingmaker:Lie
Dave_kingmaker
Dave_kingmakerLv4Dave_kingmaker

This is not your first go at writing your just bad at

Telling_Tall_Tales:What’s a lie
Telling_Tall_Tales
Telling_Tall_TalesAuthorTelling_Tall_Tales

It’s my first time actually trying and yeah I am pretty bad

Dave_kingmaker:This is not your first go at writing your just bad at
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Mastersun
MastersunLv1Mastersun

Thank you for constructive and adequate acceptance of criticism, and good luck on your way if you decide to write new works.

Telling_Tall_Tales:I appreciate the fair review by the way a lot of people just give no stars because the author did one thing wrong but you gave me what you believed my story deserved and I appreciate it.