Review Detail of bndr in ignored
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the logic in this novel matter less as you move in the novel . small example is to enter the seald realm they take the top 10 student , and the surprise it become the top 50 , how I don't know . and also the system doesn't make sense. also there is multiple sect but author never goes and mention them , also he use magic that use the surroundings mana but guess what ? . when he face a beast it use his mana somehow , isn't it an amazing , also him coming back after 5year and just saying Eilf guys and then next day is out of the Academy or sect hunting after not being there for 5 year.
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VenerableDio
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Thanks for reading, let me clarify, 1. I don’t think I ever wrote only 10 people can go into the sacred realm, I wrote 25 people each from both inner sect and core sect. 2. System not really that complicated, it can scan things, absorb certain knowledge, show stats of mc, and help mc in very limited ways. 3. Beast are natural creatures of nature, so some beast are mutated, causing them to use mana (not all) 4. when he came back, a strict surveillance was put on him til he came into questioning, etc…(don’t spoil it for people who have yet to read) 5. I was planning on talking about the other sects when it became relevant, don’t wanna just dump a whole info load when it won’t be relevant anytime soon But I love critism, it helps with improvement😁
Criticism? buddy i thought u were soft😈 now i will insult (and give advices obviously) u for every major mistake
VenerableDio:Thanks for reading, let me clarify, 1. I don’t think I ever wrote only 10 people can go into the sacred realm, I wrote 25 people each from both inner sect and core sect. 2. System not really that complicated, it can scan things, absorb certain knowledge, show stats of mc, and help mc in very limited ways. 3. Beast are natural creatures of nature, so some beast are mutated, causing them to use mana (not all) 4. when he came back, a strict surveillance was put on him til he came into questioning, etc…(don’t spoil it for people who have yet to read) 5. I was planning on talking about the other sects when it became relevant, don’t wanna just dump a whole info load when it won’t be relevant anytime soon But I love critism, it helps with improvement😁