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A shameless review from the author here. This is my 1st book so if the readers can kindly point out the mistakes I make I will be able to improve my writing skills. So please interaction in the Comments or Review section is very much appreciated. Peace7
City: My Past Life was Exposed and The Whole Network Burst Into Tears!
Geek_Lantern
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They learn, but they like Koreans learn a bunch of impractical things just to make the test harder instead of testing if they actually learned.
Ghost_Playing:Uhm, well. 1st your English vocabulary seems VERY limited since you use CHINESE words that nobody understand for certain words. 2nd Why do you use Chinese names? Do you know how confusing they are?? 3rd well, your grammar will be suffer greatly since you don’t really have a great vocabulary 👀 (that’s all. You seem chinese, and I don’t know why all Chinese Authors seem to have the same problems since you’d usually think you gues learn English in school/university/high-school but it always seems like that isn’t the case cause you always go back to the usual wordings that chinese use in the Chinese language and use that for you ENGLISH phrasing making it sound VERY weird for us. Which brings me to a second question. Why do you guys always have the same troupe? Is there a problem that I’m not seeing or does EVERY Chinese Author have a sister? Or the way you guys describe beauty…(jade beauty, phoenix eyes, flawless skin etc. …)
Uhm, well. 1st your English vocabulary seems VERY limited since you use CHINESE words that nobody understand for certain words. 2nd Why do you use Chinese names? Do you know how confusing they are?? 3rd well, your grammar will be suffer greatly since you don’t really have a great vocabulary 👀 (that’s all. You seem chinese, and I don’t know why all Chinese Authors seem to have the same problems since you’d usually think you gues learn English in school/university/high-school but it always seems like that isn’t the case cause you always go back to the usual wordings that chinese use in the Chinese language and use that for you ENGLISH phrasing making it sound VERY weird for us. Which brings me to a second question. Why do you guys always have the same troupe? Is there a problem that I’m not seeing or does EVERY Chinese Author have a sister? Or the way you guys describe beauty…(jade beauty, phoenix eyes, flawless skin etc. …)
Yeah i agree with this guy like why chinese names of all names out there, you could have chosen Billy and its still way better than whatever chinese names you put. Like if you can translate this to english why not the name? Also why do you choose this pretty much trashy troupe when there are countless better ones out there? Better Rewrite it or make a new one with a better troupe than this used trash
Ghost_Playing:Uhm, well. 1st your English vocabulary seems VERY limited since you use CHINESE words that nobody understand for certain words. 2nd Why do you use Chinese names? Do you know how confusing they are?? 3rd well, your grammar will be suffer greatly since you don’t really have a great vocabulary 👀 (that’s all. You seem chinese, and I don’t know why all Chinese Authors seem to have the same problems since you’d usually think you gues learn English in school/university/high-school but it always seems like that isn’t the case cause you always go back to the usual wordings that chinese use in the Chinese language and use that for you ENGLISH phrasing making it sound VERY weird for us. Which brings me to a second question. Why do you guys always have the same troupe? Is there a problem that I’m not seeing or does EVERY Chinese Author have a sister? Or the way you guys describe beauty…(jade beauty, phoenix eyes, flawless skin etc. …)
Man this would be 35% better without the sister like why? Are they even a thing like aren't they like super annoying?
Ghost_Playing:Uhm, well. 1st your English vocabulary seems VERY limited since you use CHINESE words that nobody understand for certain words. 2nd Why do you use Chinese names? Do you know how confusing they are?? 3rd well, your grammar will be suffer greatly since you don’t really have a great vocabulary 👀 (that’s all. You seem chinese, and I don’t know why all Chinese Authors seem to have the same problems since you’d usually think you gues learn English in school/university/high-school but it always seems like that isn’t the case cause you always go back to the usual wordings that chinese use in the Chinese language and use that for you ENGLISH phrasing making it sound VERY weird for us. Which brings me to a second question. Why do you guys always have the same troupe? Is there a problem that I’m not seeing or does EVERY Chinese Author have a sister? Or the way you guys describe beauty…(jade beauty, phoenix eyes, flawless skin etc. …)
Ghost_Playing:Uhm, well. 1st your English vocabulary seems VERY limited since you use CHINESE words that nobody understand for certain words. 2nd Why do you use Chinese names? Do you know how confusing they are?? 3rd well, your grammar will be suffer greatly since you don’t really have a great vocabulary 👀 (that’s all. You seem chinese, and I don’t know why all Chinese Authors seem to have the same problems since you’d usually think you gues learn English in school/university/high-school but it always seems like that isn’t the case cause you always go back to the usual wordings that chinese use in the Chinese language and use that for you ENGLISH phrasing making it sound VERY weird for us. Which brings me to a second question. Why do you guys always have the same troupe? Is there a problem that I’m not seeing or does EVERY Chinese Author have a sister? Or the way you guys describe beauty…(jade beauty, phoenix eyes, flawless skin etc. …)