Review Detail of Crazy_Ume in Survive as long as you can!!

I don't normally read horror novels but I think this story's got quite a decent storytelling The pace is also fast and that's great The way you describe the scenes is also great, I could picture all the scenes clearly Still, I could see lots of spelling errors and grammatical errors. If the author could work on these errors, the story would be a lot more engaging! I recommend using websites such as Grammaly It'll help get rid of all the errors completely! This is a very honest review so pls forgive me if I said something too straightforward 😭 Keep up the good work, author!