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The story starts out great, first chapters were good hands down. But then the realization came, author doesn't know how to write any sort of action scene and presents then by showing a op mc with legit no consistency, for example : In Pokémon he hears a broadcast over a villain leader trying to enslave everyone and threatens everyone. What he does? goes right up to his hideout and headshots him with a sniper. It's basically a whimsy wish-fulfilment fic with attempts of making a real plot, to then forget the MC's main abilities every new world he arrives in. Get's a superpower that makes him super good at math, guess what? He is super bad at math, better learn to become good at math in school. There has been 0 action and no indication on show anything else than collecting young girls to follow him on his travels when he gets to a point he can bring them, interesting idea, super bad execution. Went and saw what worlds would come next, it looked good, but then the fact remains the mc follows the plot when its convenient and sometimes he is a side character completely with 0 changes. That being said, if you still want to read this? Skip chapter 16 to 18, there is nothing that happens except the normal story from the manga/anime with the exception he invests some money.

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