Review Detail of Pclerk in Why am I in Marvel?
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The writing quality is good. Easy to understand and follow. The updates are currently often and stable. The story development and character design leave a lot to be desired. The story is a reserved guy running around wanting to make wine, exciting… just happens to have other abilities. Why is the reincarnation to an adult… that’s not reincarnation but more like transmigration or body snatching. Makes no sense with that part. The characters personalities all come off as weak and reserved. A personality like that would not in any way be able to use the powers properly the MC requested. The world hasn’t had much time to come together but the descriptions so far are ok. Nothing special. The story kind of seems like a typical Japanese transmigration story to be honest, just marvel elements added in. Even the character growth of fighting strong opponents is like leveling up but with strict levels. Some will like and some won’t, I am in the not liking category. Give it a try if your into this type of story.
Why am I in Marvel?
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Your tag for the story specifically says reincarnation. The story specifically has your character state he died. If you die and then are brought back to life in a different life, then that is by definition reincarnation. Transmigration is the movement from one world to another as you are, with the possible addition of powers, abilities, etc. you kind of mixed the two together. Having him literally visit the afterlife and then talking to people about living a new life shows it should have been more reincarnation. You don’t need to mention reincarnation with what you wrote as it becomes implied with the details.
Rolling_thunder_:I didn’t mention reincarnation at all. I was saying this was a transmigration from the beginning. About MC’s character, he will develop as the story goes on. A person can’t just change in a second after transmigration. It might take time to build. You can’t just go I’ll kill everyone in my way as soon as he transmigrated. It feels unreal and stupid. There are some authors use interesting persona as they were in their previous life. But this MC is a normal man, so yeah it will take some time. Please have patience and enjoy the read.
I didn’t mention reincarnation at all. I was saying this was a transmigration from the beginning. About MC’s character, he will develop as the story goes on. A person can’t just change in a second after transmigration. It might take time to build. You can’t just go I’ll kill everyone in my way as soon as he transmigrated. It feels unreal and stupid. There are some authors use interesting persona as they were in their previous life. But this MC is a normal man, so yeah it will take some time. Please have patience and enjoy the read.