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Review Detail of Leo_Bassist in Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel

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Leo_Bassist
Leo_BassistLv111yrLeo_Bassist

First 100 chapters are really good. Mc really takes advantage of his knowledge of the novel he read from the past life. It went suddenly downhill after 100 chapters author make it change and it seems forced to me. Author slowly nerfing the mc that he makes always now struggle and become a shonen protagonist that always survived in the plot armor.

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Loser's redo: Transmigration in a novel

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Thank you for the review! And well thank you for reading till chap 100 I will take you advice into consideration and try to improve the novel. I don't know if I should say it plot armor

Efthee
EftheeLv13Efthee

I do agree, especially with joining the everlor organization and all that in chap 112, like I felt that after he went thru the transportation, his personality felt all over the place, I will read more and see how it is in future, but yea the early magical transport did make me a bit of letdown considering I was looking forward to how aeron and his haremmets face against mc but oh well