Review Detail of NiceReviewer in The Heir of Merlin in HP universe

Quit after 3 chapters. Why? Plently of reasons. Extremely childish writing style. Stupid author smileys and comments in the middle of the story which drags down any semblance of athmosphere even further down the gutter. The grammar is even worse than my own. The constant spelling errors are a nightmare. The author uses terms that make no sense. It is obvious that the author is living somewhere in Asia where his self insert character is also from. Also the child already got 2 ultra buffs while still inside the womb. So don't even expect any kind of challenge. Don't expect a single bit of challenge or hardship. It is beyond cringe. Don't read it.