Review Detail of HandsomeWriter in Night's Shadow

The grammar and editing is well done. The story reads smoothly, feels pleasant and keeps my interest. The opening is somewhat cliche, your typical reborn as a baby scene that's probably the most common reincarnation opener-- but the realization that this is not the mc's first reincarnation holds your interest. The story seems to leap too quickly from the character's birth to when he begins roaming the forests on his own, but that may simply be my preferences showing. Overall, an enjoyable read with potential. 4/5.