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Review Detail of Maluop in DC: Atlantean Alchemist

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Maluop
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Zero dialogue. Written like a bad essay in 3rd person

DC: Atlantean Alchemist

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DarthVanagis
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It looks like a movie script. In other words, it’s not a writing style you should be writing in unless you’re using it to instruct actors.

Helia_King:Never seen one so I don’t know
Helia_King
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Can you explain what this means

DarthVanagis
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Means it’s written like a Highschool play

Helia_King:Can you explain what this means
Helia_King
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Never seen one so I don’t know

DarthVanagis:Means it’s written like a Highschool play
Helia_King
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Thanks

DarthVanagis:It looks like a movie script. In other words, it’s not a writing style you should be writing in unless you’re using it to instruct actors.