Review Detail of Vasco812 in Path to the Peak

Hi guys, its your author here. I'm writing here just to say that I'll be writing once a day. My goal is for the novel to at least reach 500 chapters. Sorry for my bad grammar but feel free to tell me which part that I need to fix or tell me my shortcomings or weakness in the making of this novel. Thanks for reading the novel and I hope you enjoy it! ps - giving review as an author feels sucks man.