I love the book. The grammar is on a pint and I haven't seen any mistakes but I have some things to point out. In the beginning of the faster chapter you didn't say who'sPOV it was. Like some people might get confused. So it would be nice if at the beginning of each chapter you say who'sPOv it is. Otherwise it's a great book.
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