Review Detail of Lucien121 in My Demonic System: Infinite Path to Leveling

it's pretty good so far but I hope it ends better than the last one🤣 I liked the other one but this has promise if written correctly I could see this going 200-500 easily I'm at page 23 so far think chapter 22 latest one? either way abilities is set up nice so far I can see an academy arc coming if not just military or some kind of schooling or mentoring/bounty/mercenary to interduce more powers and abilities and world perspectives but if not he'll have to learn how to control his power either way🤣 moving on past that it's well written characters feel unique world back ground updates as it goes writting quality is pretty good especially for early chapters and development so far has potential. kind of anti-hero or villain for him is the goal well based on his system at least and must say I'm a sucker for these types. I don't personally think it needs a harem but maybe kind of a player slash brothel guy after his character arcs come in cause you can't be a knight in shinning armour with a demon system 🤣 unless you make a play off of lucifer even then that's a whole nother ball park. either way I rate the beginning of it 5 stars pretty good so far and alot of potential in it. the beginning is kind of slow paced but I do think it's what the novel needs currently for this arc it's interducing characters and setting up their stories as well as his and that's about it I'll rate it again in future 🤣.