Review Detail of Milk_Hunter in The Extra's Dominance
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I should have made a review when I first saw this hidden gem but I was to entranced by the beauty of this story! An MC that won't follow the son of fate like a lost puppy and would give up his chances of power to the fated one, I love it! Raven is by far my most favorite character out of all the transmigrated/reincarnated Author Extra's. I'm sick and tired of MC's like Ren Dover or Kim Hajin always protecting the child of prophecy, like they're heroes!! They can protect themselves, due to hiding their power, they even allow teachers, students, basically everyone to mock and insult them because they are "weak", even 6 months of suffering didn't change Ren and that's sad, worry about yourself first, like a powerful and wise warrior once said, "Close your heart to their desperation, close your heart to their suffering, do not allow yourself to feel for them, they will not feel for you."
The Extra's Dominance
Drei05
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Drei05:I'm glad that you like it, especially how I made Raven, I'll make sure to try my best and make the story even better :3
Milk_Hunter:I don't just like it, I love it!! Thank you so much for making this masterpiece! UwU
Thank you as well for taking the time and effort to think of future events for the story! (つ✧ω✧)つ Btw, do you like the skills suggestions that I've left? or are they a bit too OP? (┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻
Drei05:Thank you for saying so! I really appreciate your support! ^o^
Milk_Hunter:I don't just like it, I love it!! Thank you so much for making this masterpiece! UwU
Milk_Hunter:Thank you as well for taking the time and effort to think of future events for the story! (つ✧ω✧)つ Btw, do you like the skills suggestions that I've left? or are they a bit too OP? (┛◉Д◉)┛彡┻━┻
That is wonderful news that my idea would be used in your story! What an honor! But those skills/titles is Raven exclusive only, hehe ＼(^o^)／
Drei05:They're OP, but can be considered for the future when they're all stronger :3
Milk_Hunter:That is wonderful news that my idea would be used in your story! What an honor! But those skills/titles is Raven exclusive only, hehe ＼(^o^)／
That is wonderful news for me! I'll make sure to share if I happen to find or make some good skills for Raven in the future UwU
Drei05:Well, we'll see what happens in the future :3
That's long... I'll use it as a reference sooner or later, already took a screenshot of it, so after you read this. delete the comment so no possible spoiler will be left :3
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Drei05:That's long... I'll use it as a reference sooner or later, already took a screenshot of it, so after you read this. delete the comment so no possible spoiler will be left :3
Also, if you choose the dungeon route, I think it would be best for Raven to have a few boss fights in each floor, and I have a few ideas for the guardians protecting the artifact! It would be an honor to share it with you. ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧
Drei05:That's long... I'll use it as a reference sooner or later, already took a screenshot of it, so after you read this. delete the comment so no possible spoiler will be left :3
Milk_Hunter:Also, if you choose the dungeon route, I think it would be best for Raven to have a few boss fights in each floor, and I have a few ideas for the guardians protecting the artifact! It would be an honor to share it with you. ✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧
Lovely to hear! You sure you want me to leave it at the comment section and not here? It might be spoilers :3
Drei05:Would be my pleasure, leave them at comsec, I'll read them :3
Milk_Hunter:Lovely to hear! You sure you want me to leave it at the comment section and not here? It might be spoilers :3
Btw if you choose the dungeon route, here is my idea for the Guardians guarding the artifact, I hope you love it! (I'll just delete it after you took a ss so no spoilers) :3
Drei05:Well, if you can, just leave it on DC :3
Hey buddy, thanks for the skill suggestion! Also, the guardians appear to be unkillable and extremely broken, even one of them would be enough; how do you anticipate Raven to obtain the artifact? OwO
Milk_Hunter:Btw if you choose the dungeon route, here is my idea for the Guardians guarding the artifact, I hope you love it! (I'll just delete it after you took a ss so no spoilers) :3image
You're welcome! Always happy to help, and to answer your question. This is only a test for Raven, neither he nor they are intended to kill one another. Here's my idea for their history: They are immortal beings that have existed since the beginning of time, when dungeons were first known to exist. In the alternate history where Raven did not exist, not even Alec had the chance to discover this secret mythical dungeon; instead, The Guardians have been guarding it for ages, patiently waiting for the 'creator' to pass the trial and take what is rightfully his. UwU
Red_Hawk1:Hey buddy, thanks for the skill suggestion! Also, the guardians appear to be unkillable and extremely broken, even one of them would be enough; how do you anticipate Raven to obtain the artifact? OwO
Wow, that would be an epic backstory for the guardians! Protecting the artifact since the dawn of time from those who are unworthy to wield its unimaginable power! ┻━┻ ︵ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ︵ ┻━┻
Milk_Hunter:You're welcome! Always happy to help, and to answer your question. This is only a test for Raven, neither he nor they are intended to kill one another. Here's my idea for their history: They are immortal beings that have existed since the beginning of time, when dungeons were first known to exist. In the alternate history where Raven did not exist, not even Alec had the chance to discover this secret mythical dungeon; instead, The Guardians have been guarding it for ages, patiently waiting for the 'creator' to pass the trial and take what is rightfully his. UwU