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i only read the first 5 chapters so my review may not be too accurate for future development. Overall, i think this novel is good with the battle phase, there is explanation so you won't feel lost and mc from weak to strong. Though, a criticism i have is the way the explanations are given. I don't know how to explain it in detail but its like the info is given too straightforwardly and it would be better to be more subtle. And the theme looks a bit too similar to the novel's extra with the mc using a gun though maybe the story will be completely different later. I hope that the fact that there are 'higher-existences' and 'transcendents' will later play a role in the story. i think it will be a good read for newcomers.

The Extra's Dominance

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Thanks for the great review! :3 I'll make sure to remember all of your suggestions and use them to make the story even better :3