Hello author, I love the concept of your plot. It's interesting and could be more entertaining in further chapters. Though it lacks a little bit of something, it's still doing great. keep up the good work and continue to write more.
KINTSUGI_HIME
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LIKEPlease continue to write more and don't give up. You have the potential ✌✌and you are doing great..😄
KINTSUGI_HIME:Hi Eternal_bunny! Thank you for taking your time in reading my story and leaving your honest review! I'll try to be a better story weaver for the days to come. ☺️.