Review Detail of Itsurbff_who_reads in Magic Hitman

This book is good. It has a good plot yet lacks many things. There needs to be less author notes in the middle of the story, it is rather annoying. Maybe also fix some grammatical mistakes. I’d advice grammerly. Try adding more of the setting so we can imagine where it is taking place. The character design is interesting keep it up. Overall it’s good, just needs polishing.