Review Detail of eQzy in With a Bunny in the Multiverse [Hiatus]
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The story is not bad at first, although the relationship is unrealistically written, it happens that you confess your love to girls after half a year, and they have almost 1 meeting. I'm on chapter 20 right now. And I burn often. fake relationship. The author deliberately reduces the importance of MK, elevating his girlfriend. Seriously? He plowed, did something, developed skills, pumped, and she? Here are 25 characteristics from the start in each. That's all his abilities. Now she is better at martial arts than he is. What happened next? At first she is so dependent, helpless, and now she instantly has ambitions and she commands. Let's immediately make MK a cuckold, make him weaker than her, and then generally a minor character!
With a Bunny in the Multiverse [Hiatus]
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I am reading this. I regret doing this. Somewhere in the 50-55 chapter, I realized that everything. I lost this story and will forget it after reading it. But it's not my style to finish something when it's already more than half done. I have read to the last chapter (81). And it didn't get better, it only got worse. It seems that the action is going on, but there is no tension, no drama, no action, just some kind of everyday life with a passive mk. I am categorically against the harem, but 3 characters (I will not spoil) literally sleep in their bed, spend 24 hours a day with them and that's it. Yes, that's all. The protagonist is indeed a beta, as in the entire previous book, he should have already formed his Unlimited Beta Works.
