It seems promising, and even if the relationship between the main character and Mai develops quickly, it is still better than most stories out there. My life in the Multiverse is a fairly generic title, As a result, most readers don't bother to check or click the fic, so I would advise changing it to something more interesting.
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LIKEAddyctive7:Any suggestions? I’m pretty bad at coming up with good names