Review Detail of Louis_Hometo in The World's Consciousness

I usually didn't like this kind of genre. Even with this kind of handicap. I still find this story worth to read and interesting. Especially the story telling, the way the author describe the situation was epic. It was fluid and hooked me as a reader. It also reminded just how important description of place and situation is! Well, because of a long chapter or just my own fault. I sometimes lose my sight on who's talking, who talking to who in dialogue. I hope that's only me who felt it like that~ Anyway Great job author!