Review Detail of AleeqaC in The World's Consciousness

The story is interesting and the idea for the story is intriguing. The writing is good but at the same time is confusing. I wanted to read more but at the same time, I don’t. The chapter is too long. I understand if it was to describe a fight scene, but these chapters is just conversation and more information that I get bored halfway through the chapter. There’s potential definitely, but I think author should show more than telling.