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Review Detail of ysian in Rebirth: Tyrant's New Reality

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19 chapters in, Honest review. Fisrt, if you're reading for some smut instead of wanting a good plot then read it. Literally, MC is op and there isn't overly cringy face slapping like in chinese novels. however things i don't like are: 1. The introduction to the MC. The story starts saying he has been abused/oppressed since 7 until 20+ years old. Based on writing, he was a coward first. When he dies and relives with the system, he gets immortal power for 1 hour to take revenge. On this revenge, he was literally said to have become crazy. Then when he finishes, he uses his system ability to make himself a lost son of some wealthy family. And now, his actions and mindset are neither crazy nor cowardly. Like this whole backstory was for nothing and it added nothing to as a character. He acts like a normal human being. 2. His system is broken. For each person he kills he gets 1 point. The points can be used to warp reality to a degree, manipulate minds, give MC master martial arts knowledge and any Master level knowledge like drivig..etc for less than 5 points cause earth knowledge is cheap apparently. MC from the start does not need to put any effort to gain power, can avoid all responsibilities and also helps seduce all women. On the first and second day of him having the system, his stats went from average overall 8 to 80. Mind you 100 stats is the peak of humans on earth. 3. Story development. Already said that his initial situation does not affect the plot at all. Later he fakes DNA test (for 1 point) and becomes the heir of this rich family. There has been no family bonding time and the whole main family took and love him as their own blood relative in 1 day. He also showed them his power on this first day and no one felt threathened or scared. 4. Characters. So far i can say the sisters are definitely one dimensional characters. They will love MC just because writer said so. Also since MC can use the system to make women conscious of him, he does not have to appeal to them whatsoever. 5. Personally i do not like that theme of there is superpowers on earth which are all hidden. Not realistic at all this hiden side can co-exist with normal humans witbout them even knowing. There are still many other bad writing i did not say because now its just a rant. Like how quickly things go. 24+ hours-> MC dies, relives takes revenge > find new family > Fight cousin, teach sisters martial art and massaging them > Goes on car ride with sister, gets attacked, save sisters > show family he is a superhuman, kills other family which attacked them > Goes to school. Inbetween, made aunt counscious of him. Made school goddess conscious of him. Sisters loves him as a brother.

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