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Review Detail of WeavingSpider in Master Druid in Hogwarts.

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WeavingSpider
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This book is certainly interesting but it goes the same troup as many other "non-human" fanfics. as soon as they learn how to become one it is basically just a normal hp fanfic. the real form will only be used for convenience sake or for "fun" chapters. another thing i just seem to be annoyed at, is that translations have most of the time bad writing, which isnt the case here. quite on the contrary to be honest. but there is still the "he/she/her/his" which is just all over the place. One paragraph the mc is a male, another he is a she and sometimes he gets a se☆change in the middle of a sentence. The mc isnt the dude from the first page/chapter and you can just skip it to be honest. The name of the mc is reaaaaaaaally annoying to be honest and that all people so far react as if it was normal to call a kid "Fish" is rather weird. (Firstname Fish / Family Name ________) So with all this out of the way, the writing style is good but the pronouncements are all over the place. This isn't a non human fanfic as i imagined it to be, but it also isnt a bad read. Rating would be 3,6/5 stars. (Dunno why people review with 5 stars, as if it has no short commings)

Master Druid in Hogwarts.

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Vapeghost_VG
Vapeghost_VGLv15Vapeghost_VG

Thx for the review. Just to note the he/she him/her is basically because in written Chinese he/she and him/her are the same word and you can only tell the difference from the sentence structure. Then it is mtl translated and edited so you get the him/her he/she switches all over the place. I just tend to overlook that anymore when i run in to it.

WeavingSpider
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this review was written while i was at chapter 16 or 17 (school) and will be updated in the reply's later.

Zer_0
Zer_0Lv6Zer_0

well it's still better reading material than most of the "recomended" even with the constant gender changing and character switching...

WeavingSpider:this review was written while i was at chapter 16 or 17 (school) and will be updated in the reply's later.