Review Detail of Blazzing18 in Worldwide Beasttaming: I Can Design Evolution Lines

This is a translation. Most trials are mtl these days, so the translator wouldn't look even if you gave suggestions for grammar. If your chapter comments are about the novel itself then that's even more impossible. The author is a chinese. This was probably written long ago and the author probably is far ahead of the currently translated chapter. Even if he looked on Webnovel instead of Qidian app he wouldn't change chapters that are far behind where he's currently writing.