Review Detail of milordd in The Apathetic Lord Wishes To Rest

I've read the first chapter, and though this is only the start, the writing has drawn me in. The characters are realistic and the dialogue flows nicely! The story starts with a common narrative but I'm excited for how the author will continue. There could be some work with editing the chapter, since I noticed some grammar and punctuation mistakes but it didn't affect my quality of reading. I hope the author will update soon! 💕💕