Review Detail of Zaronathor in That Unique Monster Who Just Got the 'Consciousness' Passive Skill
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This is a somewhat original work, if you can count it as that with the isekai/system clichés; though, this novel has great characters and comedy. Unfortunately the author’s tedious, garrulous and completely over descriptive style was what captivated me, then drove me away. I really enjoyed reading until the needless details became ultra repetitive and unending. I found the writing style unique and it is a certainly descriptive and immersive novel but at some points it truly becomes unbearable, which is saying a lot coming from me as I have much tolerance to this kind of thing. I read all the way into the mid 70s chapters, yet I cannot recommended this novel.
That Unique Monster Who Just Got the 'Consciousness' Passive Skill
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Zaronathor:Thanks for reading my review. For the first volume, it wasn’t bad. Story wise it was great. But you lose me on the parts I don’t take interest in, mostly the parts relating to combat actions as I believe those should be fast paced. Such as in the beginning when he defeated the swordsman, that was quick. Then cutting down the crowds, that was quick. Then killing swordsman’s brother. That was pretty sudden and sad. The fight with the bro-ther-thieves was pretty fast, (if you don’t include their stupid Pokémon villain poses). The first fight that I thought was overdone was the fight where Hideous died but it didn’t bother me too much. However, the next battlefield quest was miserable. There was an entire chapter describing the grass of the battlefield. Then the skills were being described and every time it felt like the holy hand grenade scene from Monte Python. But I digress, we’re talking about the first volume. I don’t feel like pull more examples right now though, so I’ll just leave it at that. Most of the first volume was alright.
Thanks a lot for the review and for having read this far. I do agree with your criticism. I've already had to rewrite the first volume because of the long-windedness and I was planning to do the same with the second volume. If you will allow me one question, would you say the "tedious and garrulous" writing style was too much too bear even in the first volume? Thanks for your time.
Thanks for reading my review. For the first volume, it wasn’t bad. Story wise it was great. But you lose me on the parts I don’t take interest in, mostly the parts relating to combat actions as I believe those should be fast paced. Such as in the beginning when he defeated the swordsman, that was quick. Then cutting down the crowds, that was quick. Then killing swordsman’s brother. That was pretty sudden and sad. The fight with the bro-ther-thieves was pretty fast, (if you don’t include their stupid Pokémon villain poses). The first fight that I thought was overdone was the fight where Hideous died but it didn’t bother me too much. However, the next battlefield quest was miserable. There was an entire chapter describing the grass of the battlefield. Then the skills were being described and every time it felt like the holy hand grenade scene from Monte Python. But I digress, we’re talking about the first volume. I don’t feel like pull more examples right now though, so I’ll just leave it at that. Most of the first volume was alright.